Monday, June 2, 2008

Girls Camp 2008

So my wife Katie asked me to do a logo for the girls camp this year. Leave a comment, let me know what you think? Obviously it's the leaders that have the final call, but I appreciate all comments.

9 comments:

Katherine Wies said...

That is really good, Rich. I mean it. I am very impressed. I'm sure the Young Women will leaders like it too.

Steven Keele said...

Great Job Son. Your a chip off the ol' block.

Josh Keele said...

Wow. i can't believe how good you are, great job. The Keele Gene is totally in you. Well done bro.

the keele's said...

THANKS YOU SO SO SO MUCH!! THANK YOU! it is perfect the girls and the leaders are going to LOVE it so much! xoxoxo

Jakes Blog said...

I think that's really good, the dimensions, and lines look well developed, and clean...Great Job!

alias: Ender Wiggin said...

wow rich impressive....i think its my favorite one so far ^_^ thanks for writing about the swubway not being a sandwich or in ny lol made more sense to me....kool pics...alil wet though :p

Kevin Keele said...

Very nice! The ONLY thing I'd suggest is to put a dot or line or something between the beginning and end of the saying around the circle (since it could get a little confusing). I really like it, you should do more of these.

Anonymous said...

A more dynamic impression (not to mention, more legibility) can be achieved for your headline "Superwomen of the Scriptures" in either selecting a coordinating font that looks good in all caps OR in using standard upper/lower case expression in the "chancery-esque" font you have selected. Such fonts generally have too many flourishes to be legible in an ALL CAPS format.

Additionally, as has been suggested, using a bullet of some sort will help the reader know where to begin and end. OR center "Superwomen" to 12:00 and "of the Scriptures" centered (flipped right way up) at 6:00. This too will allow for more immediate legibility.

Lastly, and perhaps most importantly, you have a very keen eye for contrast, dimension, spacing, flow and hierarchy! In general a very good-looking logo!

Tracie said...

Hey Rich! Visit my new blogspot:
www.tsh-arts.blogspot.com
I've posted a couple paintings there, or look at
www.myspace.com/tsh_arts
i have more on that page, since I have been blogging there longer.
I'm going to send this to your email too! pass it on!
Tracie